I believe what you published was actually very reasonable.
But, what about this? what if you were to write a awesome headline?
I am not suggesting your information is not good, however suppose you added something that grabbed a person's attention? I mean ƒ?ƒ‚—pŒfŽｦ"
is a little boring. You could glance at Yahoo's home page and see how they create article titles to get viewers interested.
You might add a video or a pic or two to get readers interested about
what you've written. In my opinion, it could bring your posts a
little bit more interesting.
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